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Cheyenne
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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rocky mountain beauty green eyes God made first proportioned everything else complementary Xanadu, my girl of the mountains she had her style I was beguiled mountain streams touched by Paradise so too, this rocky mountain beauty panache personified elegance to my aw shucks Arkansas raw she saw in me chaste potpourri eagles soar o'er imposing peaks and crags I expel my breath at such magnificence lost in the still of the moment rocky mountain beauty takes my hand together one love has begun breath catches in my throat shortness, hard to breathe not because of thin mountain air no rocky mountain beauty thudding of heart clean off the chart simple things unhurried strolls . . . out-of-the-way places rocky mountain beauty made spectacular out of the ordinary soft voice softer hands cupping roadside flowers my love, my all God, I stood tall remembrance of our short romance, painful rocky mountain beauty touched my soul while there, she aided and abetted my maturity manhood took center stage she made me feel I was a deal time dulls so many things I cannot recall fuzzy thoughts of yesteryears except one, stamped indelibly within my heart rocky mountain beauty Dee maybe sometimes I cross her mind . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know... all of this.   |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I am so happy that you know and understand. Thank you, sunshine for that. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I can relate. Got one or two special places in the old memory banks myself. I too, would like to think I'm remembered every now and then. Enjoyable. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wistful, poignant, beautiful.  Best~ Amaryllis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Jerry The back drop of nature makes a perfect setting. I'm guessing she does! Eric |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
I’ve never got close to any beauty, just stood in admiration many times and they were gone in a flash. Fine writing Jerry.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
In the end this piece kinda gives off a sense of hope. Hoping she thinks of you at least once in a while. I like it. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hi Trina, You know, within the last year I attempted to see if Dee was still alive and kicking. Wasn't able to. Thank you for reading me, it is very complimentary. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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