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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-11-03 01:59 PM

I want to place my fingers carefully upon your skin
a pianist prepared to play a masterpiece of heat

I want to smell the waves of your hair
crashing down on my face in tides

I want to taste your rolling laughter
filling the air with happiness

I want to

I want you.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (11-04-2010 04:44 PM).]

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

1 posted 2010-11-03 06:17 PM

Hmm...the title kinda threw me off. I find this Interesting though. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-11-05 02:28 PM

Your title is good for the imagination as is your poem.

You're smoking hot, metal man~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-11-05 06:42 PM

I like that roll right on into the direct point.....passionate one...Right on!

Eric

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2010-11-05 11:19 PM

sinfully boobopdeewop, thanks. i changed it. i was too lazy to title it something good when i wrote it.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2010-11-05 11:23 PM

BluesSerenade, thank you! You rule.

Eric, thanks dude. I appreciate the kind words, it feels good to write again.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2010-11-05 11:30 PM

I want you too.

(sometimes I just crack myself up!!!)

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

7 posted 2010-11-06 12:05 PM

Back off, Alibumdrum! My fiance will fightchaaa and she's a feisty one!

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

8 posted 2010-11-06 12:45 PM

Hey Viking...
Glad ya changed up the title

This is very intense, your writing never bores.
My best~
Amaryllis

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2010-11-06 11:47 AM

Thanks Amdrambambam.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2010-11-07 01:56 AM

Hey you - a fiance too. Life is good, huh. Tell her that I just love to tease you and that I am only in love with your poetry. Happy for you, Paul.

A

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

11 posted 2010-11-08 06:27 PM

This poem is wonderful, hot, and full of your passion for your love. Great!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

12 posted 2010-11-08 10:43 PM

Aliboo.. Only joshing ya!

And yes, I'm a lucky dude. I'm glad somebody is in love with my poetry.

Thanks Ken!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2010-11-09 02:52 AM

nice

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

14 posted 2010-11-12 04:34 PM

thanks

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2010-11-14 09:06 PM

Enjoyed...James

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

16 posted 2010-11-15 12:44 PM

Smokin'

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

17 posted 2010-11-15 10:31 AM

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