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Winter
Junior Member

since 2010-11-01

Posts 10
On the autumn wind

0 posted 2010-11-02 12:00 PM

There, love, don`t cry
lean into me, my softness
always yields
here, just where my neckline cups your jaw
so familiar-
allow your tears
to dampen this thin blouse,
and I will stroke the sorry from your shoulders-
your wide, your strong, your brawny
shaking shoulders.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-11-02 12:06 PM

ah~~ this is tender with a slightly sesnsual feel... enjoyed your pen here and look forward to reading more from you..

welcome to the blue pages, I think you'll enjoy it here

Winter
Junior Member

since 2010-11-01

Posts 10
On the autumn wind

2 posted 2010-11-02 12:09 PM

Thank you very much, Cpat Hair!

.*.*.Winter*.*.*

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 2010-11-02 12:18 PM

Been there, done that. An excellent entry. Welcome to the blue waters of PIP.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-11-02 12:21 PM

Welcome!

You painted the scene with choice words very well.

Apologies bring us all back to humility which actually makes us stronger because we recognize we're human......Great stuff, look forward to reading your work again.

Eric

Winter
Junior Member

since 2010-11-01

Posts 10
On the autumn wind

5 posted 2010-11-02 12:23 PM

thank you Andrew Scott and ethome! That is so kind.

.*.*.Winter*.*.*

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

6 posted 2010-11-02 01:55 AM

"my softness always yields here"
good stuff!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2010-11-02 01:58 AM

This just touches me inside. Very beautiful.
And warm welcomes to you.

A

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2010-11-02 05:32 AM

fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

9 posted 2010-11-02 08:10 AM

Beautifully rendered. We guys hate to find that soft spot in us, but it is there, nonetheless.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2010-11-02 08:21 AM

Ah, such a tender moment. This makes me feel apologetic too,Thanx for sharing.

Wonderful Piece.

Welcome to PIP!

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

11 posted 2010-11-02 08:43 AM

If this is just the tip of you iceberg Winter, I can't wait to see what else you have for us. Welcome indeed! Eusta

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

12 posted 2010-11-02 01:57 PM

I am in love with this... great writing, and welcome to PiP!

Best~
Amaryllis

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2010-11-02 06:17 PM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2010-11-02 07:28 PM

Welcome to Passions...Winter...

and I can see you've already provided
the thaw of spring.

Please check your email
for a Very Special Welcome!

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