Open Poetry #46 |
Sweetest Memory. |
Donovan Callinan Junior Member
since 2010-08-01
Posts 37Omaha, Nebraska U.S. |
Sweetest Memory I find earrings on the seat of my car. It makes me smile. I know exactly whose they are. I can still feel her lips on mine. They found me in the dark. Tasting like the fire that follows sips of wine. A force I could not resist. I gave way to the moment, A man unmoving moved by a kiss. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, such a sweet memory. A kiss hold so much power, doesn't it? Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Been down that road, that is for sure . . . Nicely done. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I adore the weight of the image of the earrings left on the seat of the car... wonderful! Best~ Amaryllis |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... enjoyed the look in. |
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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey |
beautiful! |
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