I'm Breaking Down Your Sturdy Door.

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Open Poetry #46

I'm Breaking Down Your Sturdy Door.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-10-30 09:24 AM

I'm breaking down your sturdy door
I shall not knock - no, not anymore
I've knocked so much, my skin has tore
but I'm not weak - not like before

Last night, I put the reaper to shame
no longer will he call your name
Life and death is not the same
I'm here for you now, to share your pain

I'm breaking down your sturdy door,
I shall not knock - No, not anymore.
***
after reading

DON'T COME KNOCKING AT MY DOOR
by Alexander

I was inspired to write this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

AlexanderPoetry
Junior Member

since 2006-07-31

Posts 30

1 posted 2010-10-30 12:09 PM

rapturous applause !!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2010-10-30 12:21 PM

Go for it! Doesn't matter if it's a sturdy door or not.
I can tell you mean business so do your thing!! Knock the damn thing right down into the house then go straighten that young man out!!

Enjoyed this.

Eric

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2010-10-30 01:02 PM

Alexander, Thanx

your writing was my inspiration.

Eric - lol Thanx for looking in. Glad you enjoyed.

If you still have the check from PCH I'll be glad to show you the way to MY door haha.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2010-10-30 02:09 PM

Great piece of writing!

Marti

"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2010-10-30 05:10 PM

Loved it,latearrival

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2010-10-31 10:58 AM

Thanx Misty, LateA

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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