Hallows' Eve (Dreams and Regrets)

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Open Poetry #46

Hallows' Eve (Dreams and Regrets)

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-10-29 12:41 PM

         Hallows' Eve
  (Dreams and Regrets)

the curtain falls on …

places I’ll never see
things I’ll never be
loves that went astray
things I didn’t say
songs I’ve never sung
things I’ve never done
doors and paths not taken
hopes and dreams mistaken
fine poems I’ll never write
just battles I’ll never fight

… on falls the curtain

              --- b. e. adams (10/29/2010)

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-29 12:49 PM

the opposite is true as well...
all the things you've been
all the things you've seen
all the poems you've written
and all the songs you've sung

enjoyed your offering sir..understand it completely and have often felt the same

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20

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Mi now

2 posted 2010-10-29 12:49 PM

A sad/sweet lament of regret... beautifully written
Best~
Amaryllis

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

3 posted 2010-10-29 01:26 PM

Dreams & Regrets.....we all have them eh? Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

4 posted 2010-10-29 01:52 PM

we are sand grain, we can't do everything or be everywhere..Thanks for the excellent write

yann

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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5 posted 2010-10-29 02:56 PM

That kind of never land is full of quicksand. good write! ebm

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

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Bangalore,India

6 posted 2010-10-30 03:09 AM

can relate to these words very much.Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

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White Birch Forest

7 posted 2010-10-30 02:15 PM

I hate the thought of so many regrets! Life is too short and we should look forward not backwards!

A wonderful bit of writing!

ooxx Marti

"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

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