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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps it was just a moment in mid morning somewhere between stars and sparrows like a wet tattoo with the sun running down and you kept your phoenix hidden from view as if my eyes would see beyond those women too mature to be just girls and that smile you poured into a tall cup of heated healing then offered something professional also that was good for the bad in spite of taste moments were mementos, picture window curiosity and imagination left colors here and there as if time was just more skin to make magical and your finger tips could be dreaming needles _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-27-2010 04:32 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always like seeing through the windows you leave here.. good stuff amigo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Super stuff as always DS. Circulation problem in the fingertips, happens all the time. Eric |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Nobody says it like you D. (sigh) ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cpat, thanks amigo ___________ et, thanks much ____________ ms ebm, thanks ms |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
I love it when I have to reread to grasp the meaning of a poem, and yours is certainly deep enough to do so. Good job. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
moments were mementos, picture window curiosity and imagination left colors here and there as if time was just more skin to make magical ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh my, that does it!!! Nice tingle to this, DS~ Heck your poetry is an event, and then some!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
eminor...thanks much...the unique style of this little place requires many visits to capture.... _________________ babyblue...sure enjoy your eyes when they lift the pauses and look under them, thanks babe |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One cannot do anything but love those foggy windows, m'friend...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thank you for peeking in... |
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