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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-10-21 07:45 PM

Eggs to Fry

Seems she couldn't
live with me,
but after I left
she couldn't live without me.
Perhaps I should
have tried harder
to please her
but I didn't even
know how to try.
"One less bell to answer,
one less egg to fry."

JamesLee
21October
2010

Last two lines
from the song
by the "Fifth
Dimension."

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-10-21 11:02 PM

Yea yea yea, or bigger fish to fry maybe!!

Love is a fickle one isn't it!
Hang in there James.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-10-22 05:06 AM

I found this to be an intresting read
"One less egg to fry"
I guess thats about as optimistic as one can get in that situation. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2010-10-22 05:27 AM

enjoyed this James.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-10-22 07:07 AM

Good ending to complete the rest James.
Concise writing!

Eric

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2010-10-23 04:49 PM

well enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2010-10-24 03:17 AM

gotta look at the bright side of it I guess

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2010-10-24 06:46 AM

Enjoyed it, JamesM

M

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

8 posted 2010-10-24 09:23 AM

interesting 'slice of life' write!

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

9 posted 2010-10-26 05:55 PM

nice

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2010-10-31 02:29 PM

love that spritful poem.

regards

yann

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

11 posted 2010-10-31 02:42 PM

Oh, do I ever relate to this poem.=, especially the lines, "but I didn't even /
know how to try."

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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