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For Her |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In a dream Beyond reason I held you in my arms It was the season Of feeling It was autumn The leaves of the trees The gold of your hair The air was cool Your skin warm Your face Your eyes I held you in my arms It was a dream And I was happy . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
dreams... |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
Loved it. You painted it real nice. Z. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many of us can relate to those "dreams beyond reason" ... (which may be all we have left) ... well 'penned' !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sometimes "beyond reason" is my favorite place to be. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Happy dreams are healing to our hearts. Very nice. Margherita |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very good. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sometimes some well arranged simple descriptive lines can paint such a beautiful vivid picture. This is a lovely feeling provoking write. The dream aspect setting it off perfectly. Eric |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all John . |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, John. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Just wonderful  |
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