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of velvet misconception |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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would you whisper to me fair mirage and shall we play dominos again then with ice cubes upon your butterfly should I be so bold as to admire the cashmere nudity of your cellophane if you choose it for your healing when the arid glances from my eyes withdraw moisture from your wounds and leave you panting with glassy saliva you call it kiss proof when heated and your mouth cannot close to capture lest of mind you are lost in the fervor and my broken buttons are your bread crumbs ________________ daark |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
my broken buttons are your bread crumbs in ending line you bring forth the image of dropping bread crumbs to find your way back..through the dark no doubt.. nice blend for me of fairy tale and depth amigo... always enjoy the things you share here... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
ooooh my....that is some heady stuff, darkness. . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
cpat, thanks guy...yes to find the way back..grin _____________ ms bb-bel1e, thanks little one |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm.... What do to with bread crumbs... Heh...I have a favorite way of picking up the stray ones.  Good stuff, as Belle says... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"and my broken buttons are your breadcrumbs" Interesting and leaves me pondering... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
"and my broken buttons are your bread crumbs" Seems to be the favorite line. Its left there for the mind to conceive what it will. Enjoyed.  -Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...oh quit teasing me that way..thanks babe _______________ ms angel, thanks lady friend _______________ ms sinfull, thanks for the eyes ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your title but ummm, I'll pass on the bread crumbs. *yank* *smooch* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...um so do you know the way by heart? thanks babe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the replies are as sensual as are your words As Always, I feel uplifted when reading you M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It seems to me that ice cubes would have very short life in this case. You are the weaver of colorful sensuous canvases. Very original artwork. Love, Margherita |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoyed very much! Kat >^..^< |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Don't know how I missed this one. I'm glad it came up again. Especially loved the last line... ~Sunkissed |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and shall we play dominos again then with ice cubes upon your butterfly" stranger darling, do you remember where the butterfly is? ice cubes may be cold but it's a sweet cold pain. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs..thanks lady ________________ ms mar, thank you lady friend _______________ ms kat, thanks so much for the eyes _______________ ms sunkiss, thank you for letting me smile you _______________ lady1, yes I remember ....and can hear your sounds as you shiver..thanks babe |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I'm curious as to how the buttons got broken in the first place... ebm |
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