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Humble Fare
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Humble Fare |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
A poet penned pastries of gold encrusted Crème de la crème Ronberry whipped dreams To die for Sinfully rich with round mouthed vowels And just kissed consonants Exquisite juxtaposition Layered syntax Sweet seduction of the tongue With writhing words Undulating pronunciations Dancing lips and teeth Masticating Anticipating the next slice Scribbled with a crazy smooth topping And just a hint Of Iambe Creating cravings He has no idea why His Ronberry wine Goes straight to our head |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL oh~~~ ?? is it served on the rocks? chilled? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems to come straight from the [genie's] bottle, doesn't it?  Enjoying these poetic write-bys.... |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Cpat- (laughing) Straight from the bottle in a brown paper bag! Seriously, we'll partake of it anyway you choose to serve it. You never fail to provide intoxicating reads.  |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Sunshine-Thanks for smiling in! Hugs! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
indeed it must be humble fare, to be so served and not on a fine plate a-la-mode. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
nit picking the metaphor...Oh humble one? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL nit picking? oh no~~~ not me~~~ I was both honored and a bit embarassed when I read your offering.... since I know I am not and do not write all you say above. I scribble.... and truly am always honored and surprised when something I offer might be enjoyed.... [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-13-2010 03:02 PM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
my oh my you become more and more sensuous this one is round and open lovely |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Most enjoyable. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful variations around Ronberries. Love, Margherita |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
The Lady-Thanks, glad you liked! __________________________________________ Marchmadness- Thanks for letting me know, I apreciate it. _________________________________________ Margherita-Hugs Ida! |
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