Open Poetry #46 |
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Marge Tindal's Birthday |
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Tracie Junior Member
since 2008-05-15
Posts 40 |
Remembering My Mom on her birthday today i remember when you held me sweetly singing smiling cooing your young face and scent of white shoulders by beacon of safety. i remember the sunday dinners homework help, stories, spankings your tired hands tucking me into bed before you went out dancing with my daddy. i remember the stories you told of your own mother and tangled childhood a whole life you lived before we met seeing pictures of you in prom dresses i remember your patience and confusion as i grew into a distant adult avoiding your questions and pushing away from everything you i remember later becoming friends and then holding you in sickness trying to give you an ounce of the care you had blanketed my life with i remember your scared eyes and brave resolve and in the end you still trying to comfort me as tears rolled down your cheeks and you fell away from me forever. |
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a very touching memory...and tribute to your mom... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tracie, this is a beautiful tribute and memory of your mother. I only hope that my children will remember me as fondly as you do yours. She is missed, indeed. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think dear Marge is smiling through tears up there in heaven, as she savors your beautiful words, dear Tracie. Missing her very much, as she was a wonderful presence on Pip. Remembering her together with you. I am sure she is a beacon up there too. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nicely said, Tracie. We remembere her, too, for all of the joy she shared with us here. She was a great lady and is missed... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Looks like the apple don't fall far from the tree, Tracie. This is such a beautiful tribute to your mom who I miss very much. It made me cry A wonderful birthday present. |
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Tracie Junior Member
since 2008-05-15
Posts 40 |
Thank you all for your kinds words. I was a little embarrassed to post on here, but I knew Mom would appreciate it. Too bad I didn't spell check first-- the "by" in the first stanza was supposed to be "my"--ha ha oh well, that's what I get for trying to type a poem and work at the same time. ~Tracie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sniff... ![]() |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Tracy, As I told you earlier today, your words brought tears to my eyes. There's a poet in you and I wish you would let it guide your hand, because your poem is just beautifully written and right from the heart, like your mom's poetry was. Don't be embarressed, just keep on writing. I know your mom would have been very proud if she could have read it. I know I am. ![]() Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Truly a beautiful tribute. Happy Birthday to Your Mom. ![]() -Trina There are places in the heart that do not yet exist; suffering has to enter in for them to come to be - LeonBloy |
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Yuka Member
since 2010-08-19
Posts 71china |
brought tears to my eyes Tracie although never sharing the times when she was in PIP but read your post and the following reply i knew much about your mom obviously she deserves great miss [This message has been edited by Yuka (10-13-2010 03:01 AM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Tracie, I was looking at the composite of Marge with other pip members just today. Her birthday although I did not remember that. So I was happy to read this this morning. Thank you , latearrival/ jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A beautiful tribute, Tracie. Your mother was/is a special lady and she is greatly missed here. I'm sure she found much joy in sharing her heart and words and the fact that you chose to share this poem with us here must have her ... beside you with love. Helen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautifully expressed, my friend. Marge spread sunshine with every breath she took. Though I never personally met her, through the various emails we shared and our many meetings on PIP, I know we shared much in spirit, She is immensely missed and loved. jimmy |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Tracie I never see a full moon without thinking of your mom what a lady and poetess thank you for this... |
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Tracie Junior Member
since 2008-05-15
Posts 40 |
Awww thank you all for the lovely comments about my mom. She LOVED you guys so much, and you all helped me and my family get through her passing with all your support. Thanks so much. Love, Tracie |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You deserve it dear lady. Beautiful poem, I'm gonna share it with Muys. So...how about giving us some more beautiful poems from your hand. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Always in our hearts, she is remembered. Peace to you and yours. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Happy Belated birthday Marge! Sure do miss you, but as we see, you live on through Tracie and memories and words of love. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She was a specail lady with a heart full of love and endless huglets for everyone who was fortunate enough to know her as a poet, as a friend. Blessed be~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and how I miss her, her poetry and advice. Kiss those "grandie girls for me". Maureen |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Tracie this is a beautiful tribute to your mom. She is so missed. I think of her often. Thank you for this. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a loving tribute to a lady who defined the word "love"... She is greatly missed... but always in our hearts. And she would have loved this... her smile lit up the screen when the subject was her children or grandiegirls! ![]() |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I miss your Mom so very much! She was such a kind, loving and funny lady. Her poems always touched my heart and the love she had for the grandie-girls can never be rivaled. Thank you for sharing this with us. She is missed very much here at PiP. ooxx Marti
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
We all remember Marge so well. She was one of the first I met here at Passions years ago and always remained one of my favorites. She was so kind and a wonderful poet. She always had time for others, a very unselfish person. I too miss Marge very much. This is a wondeful write and tribute to your Mom. Thanks for sharing! Eric |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful and touching remembrance of your mom and our friend, Tracie. She is sorely missed. ((HUGS)) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
exceptionally fine! |
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Tracie Junior Member
since 2008-05-15
Posts 40 |
I'm very touched by all your replies. My Mom wouldn't be surprised--you were her favorite people (except for the grandie girls of course). Love, Tracie |
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