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Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-10-11 08:32 AM

Betwixt and between party colors called autumn
Lies the drying siennas of fall
Sunflower’s shriveled suicide stalks
Hari karied before the killing frost
Bites lingering brilliance into umber crumbling

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (10-11-2010 09:54 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-11 08:40 AM

like your use of color here..and the prgressive fade from brilliance to the sublter hues...

nice....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-10-11 09:39 AM

Very powerfully expressed transformation!

You make me feel for the flowers!

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2010-10-11 07:11 PM

Depends on how you look at it I guess, then again I don't live in the snow, which means I don't shovel it either.

Enjoyed your take~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2010-10-12 10:34 AM

Indeed, fall is looming near! Enjoyed!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-10-12 11:32 AM

Cpat- thanks for your eyes on this one
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Margherita-yes, nature can seem cruel. Thanks for the read
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BluesSerenade- I'm glad you liked it
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Sunshine-Get out your rake sweetie!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-10-12 12:16 PM

and the smooth under
the leaves...can hear them whisper
I imagine...

enjoyed you ms

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2010-10-12 12:17 PM

Beautifully expressed, Eusta. Enjoyed much!

~Sunkissed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-10-12 03:12 PM

D-Stirred your imagination eh...I'm humbled.
Many thanks and as you know, you are much enjoyed here as well.
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Sunkissed-Thank you so much for your kind and generous praise.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2010-10-13 05:50 PM

perfectly colored ebm

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