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Open Poetry #46
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2010-10-10 06:31 AM



Heat, and the people
waiting for the picnic train---
barely raging haze.


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bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
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1 posted 2010-10-10 12:01 PM

neat little package, easy 1~~~filled with so much imagery in so few syllables~~~

~enjoyed

             
Margherita
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2 posted 2010-10-11 09:37 AM

There is a pic nic train, funny. Love the atmosphere you created here, very well done!

Love,
Margherita
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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3 posted 2010-10-11 07:09 PM

Thanks for sharing these little snippets, they really take me there.
easy1
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4 posted 2010-10-12 01:06 AM

Thanks bel1e, Margherita, and BluesSerenade for your kind words.
I guess these are meant to reverberate a little, like warm air so often does in the afternoon...
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