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Goodbye (Blow a Kiss)
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Goodbye (Blow a Kiss) |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
On my way home I got a text from her on my phone Her text reads: My love, Time to end this good thing of ours Like winter ends the lives of beautiful flowers You know life doesn't like it when you're happy for too long How come things that feel so right End up being so wrong Oh well, it is what it is I enjoyed our time together love This is my goodbye As I type this I'm trying not to cry I won't be around when you read this So just blow a kiss And I'll catch it What do I reply with? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh so sad, so very sad. What do you ever say to goodbye? |
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Yuka Member
since 2010-08-19
Posts 71china |
yes indeed,life doesn't like it when you're happy for too long sad and moving.love read |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Oh, the hardships of a poet that love is a roller coaster at times. |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Street Poet - Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened. You learned something. Now reality says you must move on. I like the flow and context of this work. Namyh |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~feeling this~*~*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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