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Open Poetry #46

As the day...

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2010-10-07 07:20 PM

comes to a end
the sun stretched his
rays alittle longer
so that time would slow
down.
So that
I can speed up just
abit, before
the darkness from the eastern
sky doesn't
catch me under it's
spell. Yet the sun
can only stay half way
trying it's best. Knowing
that i still worry about
things that lurk in
the dark.
Yet i don't
worry no I won't worry, since
he has friends
on the other side
to light my way
home until
he comes from the
eastern sky with
a friendly smile
on it's face.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-10-08 10:43 AM

Nice thoughts here!

M

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2010-10-09 12:03 PM

I loved this - from the west to the east it was delightful.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2010-10-09 02:58 PM

thanks for your thought on my poetry Margherita.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

4 posted 2010-10-09 02:59 PM

Mysteria thanks for reading, glad you liked it from the west to the east of the sky.

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