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Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

0 posted 2010-10-06 02:13 PM

My love,

Tell me again of rainbows
dancing between midnight
and your lips that leave
indelible impressions
upon the heart

weave tales over warm
skin only fingertips
can discipher and faith
can reveal

I am your shield

your mirror

so whisper softly
hidden secrets tasting
of brine and spirits
bound so tenderly with
twine and soul

for I love you so

I love you...

~Sunkissed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-10-06 02:46 PM

Sweet! Oh, how soft and romantic. Enjoyed! ebm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-10-06 02:53 PM

A lucky "him" to have such a letter penned....
and as I said before, I think I will have to crown you queen of the romantic... your poems always seem to carry the tone and offer heart...

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

3 posted 2010-10-06 04:02 PM

Thank you, Eusta, for reading and for the kind words. They are truly appreciated!

Captain, he is very special and should know that by now. As for being the Queen of romance, you bestow far too grand a title on the likes of me. It is appreciated nonetheless. *teehee*

~Sunkissed

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

4 posted 2010-10-06 06:28 PM

~~that is one lucky him~~~

~write on~~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2010-10-06 10:11 PM

fine Romanticism!

I am particularly fond of:

"so whisper softly
hidden secrets tasting
of brine and spirits
bound so tenderly with
twine and soul"

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

6 posted 2010-10-06 11:45 PM

I agree with Cpat Hair.I thought this very romantic. Good job. latearrival

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2010-10-07 06:48 AM

like hot cocoa on a winter morning..
enjoyed it

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

8 posted 2010-10-07 08:19 AM

Belle, I hope he agrees with you! Thanks for reading!

Secondhanddreampoet, I'm glad you found something in the poem you liked. Thank you so much!

Latearrival, So kind of you to say! your comment is deeply appreciated.

Dark, There's nothing like sharing cocoa with someone special on chilly day. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

~Sunkissed

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2010-10-08 10:19 AM

The heart has indeed inspired you beautifully here, dear Sunkissed.

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

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