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Open Poetry #46

Crying after a nightmare

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-09-30 08:52 AM

I once was a child,
crying after a nightmare,
screams down the long hall.

Now, my enemies drug me,
and the nightmares are endured.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-09-30 09:15 AM

intense...ebm

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-09-30 06:09 PM

Still makes one want to scream!

Yes, intense!

Love,
Margherita

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

3 posted 2010-10-01 02:50 AM

What a super tanka! Classic form, origianl subject matter, straight to the point and beautifull expressed. I give it five stars.

ngaiobeck
Junior Member

since 2010-09-30

Posts 11
Auberge France

4 posted 2010-10-01 01:35 PM

Short but powerful!

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

5 posted 2010-10-01 04:33 PM

Yikes, this is scary and very intense.
Marti

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2010-10-02 09:30 PM

That's another nightmare all together, eh!

Sad, but your poem sends a great message.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

7 posted 2010-10-03 07:04 PM

Thank you all for your kind words.

Romans 12:9-21

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