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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2010-09-27 04:45 PM



Sweep me off my feet,
Send me into psychosis.
You have my permission.
Steal me from reality
Show me something wonderful.

*Amber

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2010-09-28 02:47 AM


nicely done!
Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-28 08:12 AM


Sweep me off my feet,
Send me into psychosis.
I love those lines...love that feeling! ebm

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