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Open Poetry #46

Beheld Alone Diminish

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-09-27 08:16 AM

You are the one
With to share
Those moments which
Beheld alone diminish
Yours is the holding
To my hand held
Yours the ear given
To my whisperings
Your arms rounding
To my quiet
Your breath warming
To my breathless

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-09-27 08:59 AM

Perfectly rendered closeness.

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-27 09:46 AM

Margherita-Hugs! thank you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-09-28 02:52 AM

sweet

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-09-28 08:38 AM

very nice.... a very romantic utterance....

enjoyed ma'am.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-09-28 09:50 AM

passing shadows- Thanks for the thumbs up!
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Cpat- glad you enjoyed my utterings. I'm (snickering)saving my mutterings for another poem. ebm

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

6 posted 2010-10-06 08:14 AM

I like the line `Your breath warming to my breathless`. That was clever.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-10-06 08:20 AM

Thanks Earl for letting me know.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2010-10-06 09:54 AM

I smile and start my day. Thank you for sharing this.

A

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

9 posted 2010-10-06 11:30 AM

I'm kind of partial to romantic poems and this one is just that.

Enjoyed!

~Sunkissed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-10-06 12:37 PM

Alison-Thank you for your morning eyes here!
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Sunkissed-I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

11 posted 2010-10-06 06:24 PM

lovely~

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

12 posted 2010-10-07 08:14 AM

bel1e-Thank you lady!

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