Open Poetry #46 |
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Rapunzel Rappelling |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Boredom bares its fangs Briefly before burying Them deep within Dormant dreams and desires Deviousness rises To the occasion Letting its hair down Rapunzel rappelling Her tower wall To seduce a stranger For something to do. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always a treat to see a lady let her hair down... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This brings smiles, great association with the fairy tale. Very cute. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D-Thanks for the eyes here... --------------------------------------------- Margherita- Glad you had fun with it! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I like how you wrote from Rupunzel's point of view. Must hve been really boring up there alone! Nice! Kat >^..^< |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling with this... it's always more interesting on the greener side of the tower. ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) boredom.... what is the old saying? Idle hands are the devils playground? nice piece ma'am...and regardless of what side of the tower the grass seems greener on eventaully it will still need to be mowed. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
katahdin-Glad you enjoyed my version of the tale. ----------------------------------- Sunshine- I don't think it was grass she was after...LOL -------------------------------------- Capat- (laughing) good point about the mowing. Then again, you could let it grow into hay and roll in it... |
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