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MommaLeighsa
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0 posted 2010-09-17 03:49 PM



There are times when life has to take a detour
Pebbled paths filled with remorse
forgotten lives & painful, silenced thoughts
We take life for granted
We most certainly take the feelings of others for granted
But No matter how rocky the path may be
No matter how bad our heals may bleed
We need to keep walking and enjoying what life has thrown @ us
If we don't we find ourselves pondering; wondering where everything went wrong
You never know when the path may end

There are times when we see life pass us by
without the courage to stand up and say a word
we end up regretting the things we have done
the things we have said
and the things we never did say.
Never knowing the people we love
Never loving the people we know.
so we find ourselves lost
with no recollection of what we had
until someday;we meet again.

© Copyright 2010 Leighsa M. Garrison - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-09-17 04:39 PM


The poem comes across as if one were at a
cross-roads...and that is always a difficult time.

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2 posted 2010-09-17 11:50 PM


Welcome to Passions.  Life can be full of regrets, or opportunities to make amends, the choice is sometimes a hard one that is for sure.
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-09-19 08:14 AM


Welcome to Pip, dear Leighsa!

Your poetic reflections are thought provoking. We need to grow in awareness, no doubt.

Love,
Margherita

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