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Open Poetry #46

Burn My Pain Away

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2010-09-17 05:49 AM

Burn My Pain Away

Burn my pain away,
And sing a song that I long for,
A serenade of sighs,
Drawn by the bows of hands on flesh
In the staccato throb of the aching need,
Grip my back,
Rip me open and spill me out
In the torrent of thirsting waters,
I'm one with you,
Press your cheek tighter to my heart,
And drown in me.

Burn my pain away...

'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2010-09-17 12:53 PM

Very impassioned... how appropriate to choose a red font...

Best~
Amaryllis

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

2 posted 2010-09-18 12:59 PM

This is the type of things I use to write when I first started writing. I love it

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

3 posted 2010-09-18 05:46 AM

A powerful and original love poem. The combined metaphors of music and water are very strong. Great work.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-10-31 03:16 PM

Love the intensity and pure passion!!

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