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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2010-09-16 11:12 AM



    


moving on

whispering grass waves
the scythe's sound against the stone
the world comes to rest

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-09-16 04:35 PM


Very profound and mystic, dear Marti. Spectacular picture too.

Love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
2 posted 2010-09-16 04:50 PM


Thanks so much Margherita! One of my neighbors is haying and I was watching him. I felt sad because I know that means summer is coming to an end!!
But we have to move on ...
ooxx  Marti


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-09-16 11:18 PM


What a lovely Autumn Haiku. Marti. So real.
                                 Ida

Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2010-09-17 05:56 AM


Thank you Ida! Appreciate your thoughts plus, it gives me encouragement!!

ooxx  Marti

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5 posted 2010-09-19 08:49 PM


Autumn is just like that.
Beautiful.

A

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-09-19 09:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
Misty Lilacs
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7 posted 2010-09-20 08:38 AM


Alison ... thank you. Autumn is a spectacular show of colors, cool breezes and refreshing air.

ooxx  Marti


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2010-09-20 08:39 AM


Thank you James! I'm glad you enjoyed my little haiku!

ooxx  Marti


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

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