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Open Poetry #46

Night Stroll(read second)

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2010-09-15 07:26 PM

The moon was bright and
huge tonight. The stars
was shimmering like glitter,
as the wind dance through
trees. I loved the smell of
the night, it brings the
wild out of me. Makes
me relax and enjoy such
beauty that most
don't see. It's a perfect
night to walk around
without a care about
Roger or the Guardians.
But I can't be too
relax.
If they spot me out here
this will be the last
wonderful night stroll
until I leave the prison.
Which I don't know
when that will be, can't
be caught. However if that
does happen, I take in a
deeeep breath. Letting
the night leave a long
impression in my nose,
eyes, mind
and soul.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-09-17 02:55 AM

Sounds much like house arrest, with the "neighbors" dozing off in front of the cable TV again. This is a real good write imho though, down to the crumpled syntax, and the last few lines are spot on.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

2 posted 2010-09-20 05:22 PM

Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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