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Open Poetry #46

Lovesick.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-01-27 01:00 AM

Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms

I'm sick
sick and tired
of striving for you
whoever you are.

I'd bet my life
you have pretty hair
and bright eyes.

Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms

I bet you laugh
nearly as much as I do
and your breath
has a feminine sound.

I bet your tongue
tastes like clear night's sky
and your skin
smells like wind on a lake.

Love will find you
but only on it's own
only on it's own terms.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2010-01-27 01:46 AM

This is beautiful - and you will find that woman to spend your time with. How can you help but when you write like this? Like you said, love will find you on its own terms.

Alison

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2010-01-27 02:26 AM

Love finds you when you're not looking,

problem is, I can't stop looking.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-01-27 09:39 AM

Well, then you just gotta enjoy the view!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2010-01-27 11:10 AM

Ha.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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