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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were just exchanging our handfuls of sand touristing our skin roads back and forth as if your phalloteasealogy required sordifying for certification and we did require expertise you made those strum kind of instrument sounds and I was more the piston kind of percussion you said you felt it in your toes when I was there working my way up to take you over the edge and you didn't mind the freefall you mentioned leaving your lady like remote control outside and just wearing crazy with nothing else over it except my eyes and that thing I did with my hands I was mostly speechless during your performance except for guttural vulgarity which you looked up in the adult dictionary to be sure of the meanings and you read them out loud to me after to be sure that everything intended was straight between us ________________ daark |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D- You leave little and yet everything to the imagination...You are the master of the Daark! ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm...thanks lady |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Too too much, Mr. D!!!! Only you would come up with a ladylike remote. That is just so funny, you crack me up. Hey maybe you should put a patent on it, ya think? [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-14-2010 10:16 PM).] |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Eveything intended was straight between us has taken on a new meaning. I don`t think I need an adult dictionary to figure it out. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...I need to test it further...um, are you busy? grin thanks babe _________________ eb, thanks amigo...was way more innocent than it sounds. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) you do have a way of making everything sound like a seduction... always enjoy sir... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You do make the toes wiggle with your seductive representation, playful and masterful.  Love, Margherita |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Everyone else said what I wanted to say only better lol I like!-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~~ o f f the chain, darkie~~~~~ LOL |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat, thanks amigo ______________ ms mar, thanks little lady friend _________________ rosepet, thank you for the smile ________________ bb-bel1e, thanks little one for the jingle |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...You have written a whole new dictionary yourself. I need a copy. You got an extra? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie...lol sure lil neighbor, swing on by and I will give you one with the good words already highlighted. thanks babe! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, I just want to know where I can buy this dictionary - you know, those words roll off my tongue, but I have no idea what they actually mean. I love this one, D-man. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"and you didn't mind the freefall you mentioned leaving your lady like remote control outside and just wearing crazy with nothing else over it except my eyes and that thing I did with my hands I was mostly speechless during your performance except for guttural vulgarity which you looked up in the adult dictionary to be sure of the meanings and you read them out loud to me after to be sure" _____________________________________ Damn and wow! You are too friggen awesome for your own good! I really wish I could write more like you DS! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms honeybee...humble thanks ms....but you write lovely just like a honeybee should. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm guessing you were a tightrope walker in an earlier life? You handled this one brilliantly, dark one. Too many good lines to mention but images in the reader's minds are well-illustrated...an excellent, er, body of work |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
deer' thanks guy..I am blessed by your review |
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