Open Poetry #46 |
Weeping Sentinel |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Weeping Sentinel Alone I walked, high atop a mountain crest; There stood a macabre angel, Sword drawn in silent challenge, A sentinel of granite, He seemed a part of the very mountain, Robed, and draconic wings spread wide, His furore was now frozen as dead, Dead as the cairn that lay behind him, And still he stood, For even in death, He was as immovable as his mountain, As dead as his protectorate, Wearied and broken I looked upon him, Feverish in grief to find this spectre, This effigy as the prize of my ascent, Frenzied hands clawed away the moss Of his ignominious vigilance, His graven name was my own, As my eyes streamed tears, Blood seeped in two gory rivers From behind his hooded gaze, Death, take me, Lest madness claim me, And still he stood. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
One never knows what one might find at the top of an "ancient" ridgeline. This is a little macabre, but I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting! |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you very much, my friend. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a powerful 'write' ... well done! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So much passion and emotion, deeply powerful, indeed. Enjoyed reading this, you've expressed so much thought, and the imagines of one standing alone are quite vivid. |
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