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Open Poetry #46
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Elric
Junior Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
0 posted 2010-09-09 05:55 PM


I feel it writhing through my body.
From my head to my toe.
It creeps through like a wondeful disease.
Opening up my mind.
Tingling my neck.
Tickling my stomach.
Numing my legs.
It effects me completely.

I have lost control of this feeling.
If i don't let it out I might burst.
I need to talk to you.
I must talk to you.
You need to know how I feel.
Or I may go insane.
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Earl Brinkman
Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-09-09 06:02 PM

Intense feelings to say the least.  It creeps through me like a wonderful disease was a good line.
Elric
Junior Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
2 posted 2010-09-09 06:03 PM

thank you
Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903
3 posted 2010-09-10 09:32 AM

Been there felt that! good job! ebm
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