Open Poetry #46 |
solace? |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Winter skies barren fields ice-ring trees faces passing strangers all --- b. e. adams (1/26/2010) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love the imagery you paint here, I don't perceive it as "cold", even though of course it is sad when all people are deemed strangers. But then that is an illusion, we are very much connected with each other, but we happen to lack this wonderful awareness. Take solace in the thought that there will be soon beautiful little snowdrops that will pierce the snow, starting the awakening of Nature again ... Isn't that just miraculous and enough to vibrate in joy? Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Simple yet powerful, Bruce. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Bruce, this is poignant and contrasting, I like the sensation of impossibility in your poem. regards yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - I sense the coldness in this writing, but how true... BC |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
very intense Bruce |
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