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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-09-05 07:33 AM

perhaps it was those gypsy wheel yearnings then
that drew me to the shadow sides of seaward
where the coffee girls exposed their dragons
and brewed mysteries of zen into their tease

or some haunting from blue green meadow grounds
outside of lou'ville on evening easy times
when a blue eyed woman girl made poetic seduction
and wore it like my favorite long sleeve sunday

or perhaps it was something in those sigh sounds
of a velvet eyed lady with tree switch secrets
and a tattoo that only showed up in my dreams
or when she danced on the bar for the window eyes

and made me crave only her kind of kentucky whiskey

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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-05-2010 09:36 AM).]

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-09-05 07:51 AM

I am not sure what you mean by coffee girls exposing their dragons and brewing mysteries of zen into their tease butI don`t care. I just love the sound of the words and the druken haze that you make me experience by reading them.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-09-05 09:34 AM

EB...Komodo Dragon is a coffee blend as is Zen a blend of green tea..the rest I must leave to your vivid imagination..thanks amigo

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-09-05 11:58 AM

enjoyed the words sir...
second set of lines took me back to a few places I have been and a few people I have known..

always a pleasure.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-09-05 01:02 PM

Thanks Cpat...little whisper of kentuck from my own memory..

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2010-09-05 06:02 PM

You never fail
to be a good read
and reader.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-09-05 06:35 PM

ms sun...thanks lady friend..I appreciate you whetly

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2010-09-06 05:10 PM

YOU are a master at "poetic seduction", I would say!

Thrilling!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2010-09-06 06:11 PM

ms mar..it is the surroundings of this man that seduce..I am but the ink used in their tattoos..thanks lady

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2010-09-06 08:59 PM

You do stir emotions in such a way, all slow and sultry.

My favorite part is how you simmer it to death.

Smooth stuff, DS~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2010-09-06 09:05 PM

simmer it to death? hmmmm I guess that is a good thing...thanks babyblue

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

11 posted 2010-09-07 08:38 AM

dreamers dream
of dreamy
hot and steamy
dreaming in the daark

ebm

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2010-09-07 09:32 AM

ms ebm...thanks for looking in ms

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