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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2010-09-03 02:57 AM



“Fate”

Under the waning
Moon. Losing sight, I follow
The red ribbon home.

My path is the correct one. I believe that if nothing else.

© Copyright 2010 Colin Heffernan - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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1 posted 2010-09-03 10:47 PM


Neatly composed, appreciated.

As for night walkings, I can recall---dimly, for sure---such scenes also. Out and back often ends up a reeling in, doesn't it?

Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
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2 posted 2010-09-04 12:07 PM


If I may...and please forgive my observation if I am incorrect. Is that the hilt of a samurai sword in your photo? Shameless personal questions aside, the poetry is very cool.

Regards,

Novus_Os

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2010-09-04 09:34 PM




beautifully done.

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