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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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Peeling away layers like a bruised onion, releasing tears, my soft inner core exposed, tender, raw. Held tightly within each decaying layer, wounds, old once hidden, laid bare, now examined, identified, inspected. Emotions, ripe, rotten, like long dead carcasses picked over by natures undertakers, ivory bones stripped clean. Enlightened, my heart beats patiently, like swallows waiting on a telegraph line, to migrate, flying free. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done - there is nothing better than the flight of transition. There is hope in this. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I agree with Mysteria...there is hope in this poem. Well written and expressed...thank you for sharing... Goldenrose. Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Laying bare your soul and exposing all the hurt and raw emotions, can be a very difficult process. ~ but the catharsis can lighten our spirits, enabling us to fly high and free!   EA |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
Thank you all for your kind words - just letting myself off the hook & letting some things go - feels good! naturegirl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I really like this, naturegirl. Good writing. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Profound introspective write with great imagery. Love, Margherita |
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