Open Poetry #46 |
Over There |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
In your eye there shines a beacon that beckons me to come In your eye there lies a lesson threatening to prove me dumb In your eye there hides a pitfall in which I'd surely die Your eye holds many wonders when you get caught in my eye In my ears there is a humming that I assign to various causes Sometimes, I call it "silence" but the humming never pauses Once the vibes are organized and the causes become clear, there are countless sounds to be found when listening to my ears Dew-dropped honeysuckle is a scent that I adore Wisteria and fresh cut hay are two that I love more The sweet smells and the stenches... whether labeled "dung"or "rose" "pee"or"rain" the fact remains... I love to smell my nose There's no method to my madness There's no reason to my rhyme and I'd like to take this moment since I seem to have the time Play a little dobro koto Let's home spin a bit of Zen and find out what lies over there Now that we're here again *** |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I. love. this.~!!! Wonderfully sonic, very fun word-play... just a fabulous read ~Amaryllis |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Enjoyed reading this. It brought a smile to my face. Thank you ~Sunkissed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Saved faster than you can say, "Dobro koto!" lol I LOVE everything about this poem. ~ Everything is right about this write! EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
touch the screen right----> X <-----there |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Love it! That's it! Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Read it twice, because it wanted to be read twice ... it talks nicely to me this poem. Oh, that humming in the ear! Never it was rendered with more "fragrance". Love, Margherita |
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