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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2010-08-28 12:56 PM



Journeyed long

Travelled far

Search of song

And verses are





Thirst of feeling

Parched for thought

Deep revealing

These words sought





With every well

Each hidden spring

The joys unveil

The sorrows bring





Sip with care

Gulps can waste

Drink words there

Savor each taste


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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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1 posted 2010-08-28 01:09 PM


Wise words... elegantly spoken
Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610

2 posted 2010-08-28 01:22 PM


Your words are as soft as a whisper.

Beautifully written.

~Sunkissed

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2010-08-29 05:40 AM


I did savor your beautiful words. Very nice, dear Victor!

Love,
Margherita

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