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Amberzlynnc Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 229New Jersey 
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I entered knowing what His expectations were. Though not what I'd prefered, Did not think I'd go nuts. Now I'm stuck in a rut.. I thought this might occur. So why did I agree? I'm usually so shy, But something in his eyes Convinced me to believe He'd see difference in me. He saw me just the same. To him, love's just a game. *Amber |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I can hear the disapointment coming thru in this poem. Nicely done. Kat >^..^< |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Neatly composed, and with the ring of experience. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So it happens! Best experiences come indeed when there are no expectations. Nice read! Love, Margherita  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... too often our instincts tell us what we don't want to admit... enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Sometimes we find ourselves in situations that we later regret. Still, we have the power to change our minds if we so desire and that should be respected. Enjoyed reading! ~Sunkissed |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
This sums up the situation I'm in quite perfectly. I liked. -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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