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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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0 posted 2010-08-27 10:48 PM



I entered knowing what
His expectations were.
Though not what I'd prefered,
Did not think I'd go nuts.
Now I'm stuck in a rut..
I thought this might occur.

So why did I agree?
I'm usually so shy,
But something in his eyes
Convinced me to believe
He'd see difference in me.

He saw me just the same.
To him, love's just a game.

*Amber

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katahdin
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1 posted 2010-08-27 11:48 PM


I can hear the disapointment coming thru in this poem. Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

easy1
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2 posted 2010-08-28 12:14 PM


Neatly composed, and with the ring of experience.
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-08-29 08:38 AM


So it happens! Best experiences come indeed when there are no expectations.

Nice read!

Love,
Margherita

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2010-08-29 10:34 AM


nicely done...
too often our instincts tell us what we don't want to admit...

enjoyed

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-08-29 10:18 PM


Enjoyed...James
Sunkissed
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6 posted 2010-08-29 10:27 PM


Sometimes we find ourselves in situations that we later regret. Still, we have the power to change our minds if we so desire and that should be respected.

Enjoyed reading!


~Sunkissed

rosepetals36
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7 posted 2010-08-30 09:36 PM


This sums up the situation I'm in quite perfectly. I liked.

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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