Open Poetry #46 |
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Facilis Decensus Averna |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Facilis decensus averna, This we all know now, The descent into hell is easy, And the slope slippery and greasy. We cannot go through life, Our hearts heavy and full of strife, We must learn to seize the day, And in this world make our own way. Facilis decensus averna, This we all know now, The descent into hell is easy, And the slope slippery and greasy. The road is paved with intention, The worst of which we do not mention, For fear and unknowing breed hate, And before we know it it's too late. Facilis decensus averna, This we all know now, The descent into hell is easy, And the slope slippery and greasy. -Arana Darkwolf |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You are sure right, getting down there is the easy part. ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done ma'am... the slope is an easy one to take it would seem.. enjoyed |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed! ~Sunkissed ![]() |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
The Latin phrase reminds me of stories I've read or seen on TV about vulcanologists getting trapped down inside a crater when a sudden violent eruption occured. Some of those stories are a bit on the desperately trying-to-escape, somewhat gruesome side. A good write despite the somewhat depressing subject... Thanks for sharing! |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you all for your comments. -Arana Darkwolf |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
well done enjoyed! |
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rachaelfuchsberger![]()
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thanks! -Arana Darkwolf |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
In Literature they taught us how to explicate a poem, that is, writing down the images and associations evoked by each element in a poem and each line. I am going to try to explicate this one though knowing in advance that I will fail, for doing so would take a lifetime, and part of mine is already gone. This poem suggests studies in archetypal psychology, mythoology and the role that inner figures as timeless and universal images play in our inner lives. I aj getting too sleepy to type. (yawns and falls out of chair). I try again soon. :-----abrasozs Latinos-----) |
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