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Open Poetry #46

She Couldn't Be You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-08-21 09:44 PM

She Couldn't Be You

You were so good
that when you went away
I couldn't stand
to be alone
so I tried to replace you
with someone new,
but no one could replace you,
only she came close
providing softness for my touch
bringing pleasure to my eyes,
but she simply won't do
because she'll never be you
no matter how hard she tries.

JamesLee
20August
2010

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-08-22 03:20 AM

The lament of those harmed by near-perfection denied. I sympathize.

Well and succinctly put here.

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