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Klassy Lassy
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0 posted 2010-08-19 01:56 AM




softly brushed,
late August evening
comes wanton touch of summer
gleaning upward curve of lips ~

and dreaming



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Amaryllis
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Mi now
1 posted 2010-08-19 02:00 AM


Beautiful.. spare and so elegant
~Amaryllis

passing shadows
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2 posted 2010-08-19 02:06 AM


soft and sensual

well done

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-08-19 01:29 PM


yes, sensual.. soft... and concise..
no wasted words or embelishments... just the essence distilled to meaning..

very nicely done.

Klassy Lassy
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4 posted 2010-08-19 01:35 PM


Thank you, poets,  for the gentle eyes to a summer song... ~K
zeusthamghty
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5 posted 2010-08-19 03:39 PM


all i have to say is wow
Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2010-08-19 04:02 PM


LOL.... one can only hope.  Thank you.
Margherita
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7 posted 2010-08-19 04:42 PM


So nice to see you again and with such a captivating work!

Love,
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2010-08-19 06:32 PM


  I miss the time I used to spend here... good to see you, too! ~K
BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2010-08-19 09:15 PM


Dreamy, with just the right touch of blush!!

Very lovely, Lassy~

Balladeer
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10 posted 2010-08-19 11:08 PM


You deserve a kiss for this one
jwesley
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11 posted 2010-08-19 11:55 PM


You had be before the 'dreaming' - I was definitely yours then.

j.

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2010-08-20 12:33 PM


Blues Serenade, Pink is sometimes a very becoming color, despite being totally conspicuous,

and Balladeer, it may be the tannest I will ever be in your legendary presence... hmmm,  


jwesley, I will probably never have the good sense to stop dreaming, so there you have it... I'm dusted     

Thanks for the smiles!  

Sunkissed
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13 posted 2010-08-20 12:40 PM


Very beautiful...

~Sunkissed

Klassy Lassy
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14 posted 2010-08-20 01:34 AM


So is being sunkissed.  The light holds many blessings.  Thank you for sharing with me.  ~k
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