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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Far away, pellet snow falls between narrow trees, whitening deer paths. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
quiet and peaceful easy1. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I didn`t understand what you were up to at first with your technique but I understand somewhat now. ---- Quiet and peaceful. |
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LR New Member
since 2010-08-18
Posts 4United Kingdom |
Hi Im new , just want to say I really enjoyed this. Im experimenting myself with haiku and senryu but still have not grasped the difference. Hoping to learn more from others. Kind Regards L.R. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful, easy1.. the image stays with the reader even after looking away.. very nice one, here ~Amaryllis |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a fabulous snapshot! Most excellent, easy1~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have caught the magic in this dreamy expression of stillness. Lovely indeed. Margherita |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
lovely & succint ~~something about snow & deer that brings a serene sense of purity to the soul~~~ ~enjoyed~ |
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