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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2010-08-17 12:42 PM



     

>twilight

standing by the marsh
blue heron watches keenly
twilight will come soon

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2010-08-17 01:06 PM


I've always admired the Blue Heron..for though it looks ungainly and some might say it is not a pretty bird..it moves with grace and has the patience to wait..
a pretty image..and nice words..
thanks for taking me back to a time...


Margherita
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2 posted 2010-08-17 06:09 PM


Again, dear Marti, you offer us a spectacular combination of picture and words.

Greatly enjoyed!

Love,
Margherita

easy1
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3 posted 2010-08-17 08:46 PM


Very nice. The words and the picture match well, even to the intimations of near-twilight on the legs and beak of this big bird.
Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2010-08-18 03:51 PM


Cpat Hair, this is such a big, patient bird. Seems like they stand in the same spot for hours waiting to catch something!

I'm glad I could take you back to a time ...

Misty Lilacs
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5 posted 2010-08-18 03:52 PM



Margherita, thank you sweet friend. I'm glad you liked it!

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2010-08-18 06:26 PM



easy1, thank you for your kind words. Tere is no question that this is a mighty big bird!!

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2010-08-23 01:39 PM


Actually, I think the bird and the poem are very beautiful.
                               Ida

Juju
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8 posted 2010-08-23 05:43 PM


They are one of the most graceful birds...

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Misty Lilacs
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9 posted 2010-08-24 10:58 AM


Ida ... thank you so much. Appreciate your thoughts!
Misty Lilacs
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10 posted 2010-08-24 10:59 AM


Juju .... these birds are just phenomenal! I love to just sit and watch them.
Thank you.

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