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The Rose
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The Rose |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
She stands tall and proud Like a Queen before her court Petals fall, her crown lost. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My mother has a rose garden in her backyard. This sounds like something she would say in describing those that are spent. Nice job. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
lovely write, the rose inspired you with delicacy and accuracy. regards yann |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In the heat of the summer my own Queens fall to the swelter the imagery was grand! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
How like a queen the rose. I can understand widespread admiration for these thorny plants' blooms... Wonderful write! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely write. Rose is the middle name of my daughter, granddaughter and great grandaughter. Ida |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Thanks guys! I actually found this poem whilst sifting through a pile of old childhood school projects so this must be the best part of 15 years old but I thought there was something quite sweet there. - Anya |
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