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coalesced consummation
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coalesced consummation |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you kept your smile subdued slightly as if it would be a few hours later before I might know your full intentions and if there were whisper places available like parking for the mulsanne I imagined you didn't just curb it by a whim side but looked around for that special place or a valet that was armed with full attention the tapping of your nails on my sleeve then asking me things in french and spanish as if you didn't speak my language but your eyes said you did wickedly accurate and that my nodding in agreement had penalties which you would address privately and slowly if I wouldn't mind assisting you in punishment of those conservative parts of both of us when we had a month or so for coalescing _____________ daark (jaguars of glass) |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as always...tightly woven, great wordplay, and undercurrents for the reader to play with.. looking forward to more of the series Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat..thanks amigo, much appreciated |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
coalescing now that's a new word and I love its meaning ... I missed reading you! To begin with you means to soar in the skies of true poetry. Delightful! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...so great to have you back...have missed your eyes lady friend |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wow I have missed much good poetry while I was away.. intruiging read, Dark.. and well done, as always.. Best to you.. ~Amaryllis |
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noman Junior Member
since 2009-12-26
Posts 18 |
This is very good. I like it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Amary' thanks lady...nice to see you back, hope the vacation was muy bueno. _______________ noman, thank you for the read |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
another aching hearton,,,,,, love yer stuff |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
NN, sure is fun to see your reads..thanks babe |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
From your poetry i would say that ur life is far from boring....  I once hoped for jus a moment of coalescing and got it but a mth....wow...maybe I will have to hope harder.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angle....thanks for the eyes lady...and I do refuse to be bored...be well ms |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm certainly enjoying the teeth of the jag today, yes, I am. Smiling. At you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun....am pleased that the sharp edges whet your attention. Thanks babe |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Enjoyed this piece as usual. You do have a knack for making a reader want to come back for more. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
EB, thanks so much guy. |
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