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Open Poetry #46

High School Yearbook

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-07-27 10:39 AM

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It was
A long time ago

There was much
I didn’t know and
Would have been
Better off now
Not knowing

So much
Has happened
Since then darling . . .
And much of it
Without you
Has turned out
Happily

Still
You were
Pretty

So take care
Be easy

There
In between
Susan Karen
And Kathy Jean

Yellow sunlight
On your hair

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Eterne
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2010-07-28 02:30 AM

Very nice!

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2010-07-28 03:31 AM

Sometimes it's nice to look back on happy memories. Very nice.
Kat >^..^<

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2010-07-28 03:50 AM

Wow.

We both seem to be in the memory spawn place--I hadn't read yours, so I hope you take it in good spirit that I say, "very, very, very good" and leave you with a smilie face.

? (Seriously, this was weird for me, but...good.) *chuckle*

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2010-07-28 10:30 AM

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Thank you all

Especially you SB, who, if you think about it,
may well understand the address better than others.

I was suddenly taken to this place unexpectedly.
Harvey took slight, but never the less had to make
concession to his yet younger brother who some
unknown angel still listens to and calls upon
occasionally as now in his home apparently
not so far away.

Thanks again

John

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