Open Poetry #46 |
Heavenly Beach |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heavenly Beach Somewhere between Barbers Point and Ko Olina lies a perfect stretch of beach; where the sand is as soft as silk, where the water flows like milk and honey, where the trade winds caress you like sweet morning dew, where the sun warms your body, heart and soul. A blessed place where you'll find grace, love and peace. A silky place where all of your cares will be eased. A precious place that I call Heavenly beach. "When love lives softly in your heart you will find your own Heavenly beach." JamesLee 25July 2010 |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"When love lives softly in your heart you will find your own Heavenly beach." truly James even in the middle of the desert. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A nice poem. Very optimistic. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely thoughts, JamesM Someday I would love to visit Hawaii~~ M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery ... great 'write' ! wish I was there!! |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
very beautiful. I wish I were there. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I read this to my fiance and he said "I want to live there." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lady, easy1, nakdthoughts, secondhandreampoet, OldBuddyOldPal and graeshine for the wonderful responses...this is not so much about a physcal location as about a place within your heart where you develop an appreciation for the beauty around you...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the message James! I've so often heard people convey something they deeply believe in, as that place, "where I live" Very nice thoughts~ Thanks for this. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful James, I crave for py heavenly beach...Great appplause. yann |
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