Open Poetry #46 |
We are All Perfect |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
We were all perfect once and we didn't even know it This comes to mind when I look back when I was young and fit The complaints of my youth seem trivial now I would welcome them back if I only knew how To be young again, full of life That youthfull glow But time has sped by Where did it all go My mind is still young but my shell grows old My memory's still sharp but my body won't do as it's told When I look back again In the next few years What will I see then Will I still have the same fears I was perfect once again and I didn't even know it! |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Who says you aren't perfect now? Beautifully captured. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks Lost-Poet. We are all perfect in our own imperfect way. Kat >^..^< |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
My mind is still young but my shell grows old My memory's still sharp but my body won't do as it's told Amen!! katahdin....perfect response! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks Old Buddy Old Pal Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
That's it Karen, we never know, or really appreciate something, until its gone do we? Take me for instance, I'm a nobody. But wait, nobody's perfect right? See, you were right, and this was, perfect. Nice to meet you, this was great! Richard xx |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
My body may not be what it once was but I have so much more wisdom and understanding now. Maybe there are different kinds of perfection. Ida |
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The Sky is Imagination Junior Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 25OK, US |
Really insightful. I think everyone looks back on past parts of their lives longingly, no matter what age they are. It's all part of the perfect imperfection that humans are. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks Richy, Marchmadness, and The Sky is Imagination. When I was a little girl and got into trouble I would scream "I'm not perfect!" Kat >^..^< |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it's interesting that our perspectives are always changing, and yet we often hold on to ideals of ourselves that really weren't as ideal as we are now...or may be tomorrow. enjoyed the read |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Perfection, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder. As the country songs says "I'm not as good as I once was, but I'm as good once as I ever was" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good thoughts, I like, latearrival. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Kattahdin for the pertinent and beautiful words, childhood has its beauty and truthes that alas we forget, we should see the world through child eyes the more we can...Enjoyed my read. yann |
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