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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-21 10:15 AM


Darkness fills my soul,
For I have no fears of anything
Hells flames fill my eyes in anger,
Betrayal of you love made me this way
I feel no pain of my broken heart that you gave me back,
You said I was all yours, till you found someone new
You stomped on my dreams wishes of us being together forever,
I thought what we had was so pure like the fresh spring air
Thoughts of what you did still roar though my mind
It makes the fire in my soul burn faster,
Like a raging fire burning and destroying everything in it's path,
The thought of you never being mine again
Makes me want to hurt myself?
For the darkness fills my soul
I breathe fire,
And I feel no pain
I no longer sleep, for the demons of hell keep me awake
When will they go away?
They rip at my flesh and show me how we use to be
When will they stop?
Why won't the leave me alone?
The devil entered my body
He tells me to destroy everyone who hurt me
I walk with no fear
When will the devil leave me alone??
I love you more then anything,
But I can't tell you
Because the darkness fills my soul

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Eldest
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1 posted 2010-07-21 10:49 AM


Rage is a very powerful emotion and it come through clearly in this poem.  Well said
tattooedsweetheart07
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2 posted 2010-07-21 10:59 AM


Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem...
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-07-21 11:41 AM


all we can do is keep our children from seeing the darkness...sounds like you are..very exposed soul here ms
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