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Open Poetry #46

a walk on mt. royal

Eterne
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since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2010-07-21 03:13 AM

delicate wind stroking your radiant face
announcing spring on a gray winter's day
your funny hat with the strings I pulled
to touch your full lips
with mine
shy avid kisses on the cold bench
desire, joy and blind trust
in the wonderful future in front of us
yours and mine
you and me
indifferent to the whole city spread at our feet
our being suspended
between You - I and Us
somewhere between the ground
and sky
inviting us to reach it
on immense white wings
of love

http://eterne-es.blogspot.com/2010/07/walk-on-mt-royal.html

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-07-21 08:41 AM

this is lovely~*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2010-07-21 09:00 AM

beautiful writing! Welcome to Passions! I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2010-07-21 04:38 PM

Welcome to Passions, Eterne.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2010-07-21 08:58 PM

yes, lovely to read~~

M

Eterne
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2010-07-22 11:59 AM

Thank you so much for reading and for your comments :-)

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