Open Poetry #46 |
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of glance indelible |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
sometimes when I am blessing a glance around you as you swallow a sip of morning like warmth that makes you pay second hand attention and smile like it was something almost accidental like the soft sided shoulders of dirt roads when one becomes suddenly aware of how tires feel slipping into something that holds like hands but doesn't linger long enough for formal greetings you seem to button on a blush then, slowly down letting it cover the color of your skin differently not too snug of a fit..just casually perfect and then you find it caught on something curvy so you have to wear it for just a minute longer as you realize I have you in my mind that way indelible, as if I would ever want to erase the view just before you dissolve into exiting the doorway and entering the rest of another of my daydreams _________________ daark |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the mastery of how you draw the reader into your imagery and the words, is always admired sir.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks Cpat..I appreciate your review |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
now that is one sweet spill of words, dark one~*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bb-bel1e thanks so much little one |
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