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Open Poetry #46

A Journey

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-07-20 07:01 AM

Little tortoise crunch
I hear, upon fallen leaves---
Oh, where do you go?

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2010-07-20 10:50 AM

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Very good

John

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-07-25 11:11 PM

Very nice...James

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-07-31 01:28 AM

This was interesting. Nice.

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

4 posted 2010-07-31 03:21 AM

very nice, made me smile.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-07-31 06:25 AM

ah! Wonderful!!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2010-08-01 02:59 PM

yes
I like this little tortoise

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2010-08-04 11:28 AM

enjoyed it... nice inspiration.

yann

Donovan Callinan
Junior Member

since 2010-08-01

Posts 37
Omaha, Nebraska U.S.

8 posted 2010-08-04 05:47 PM

Very D.H. Lawrence

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

9 posted 2010-08-05 09:08 AM

lol - thanks all for your kind words!

Sun a-sparklin' through
dark-leaved trees, and we are on
the big road again.

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